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 Post subject: An overview of Andray's Journey
PostPosted: Fri May 31, 2013 3:06 pm 
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This is an overview of Andray's exploration journey. Please critique!
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 Post subject: Re: An overview of Andray's Journey
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Is this supposed to be a timeline/recap thing, because some of the events appear take place before and after the Lost History story/thing, right?

Which is why you kind of just fill in what happens before after the battle where his brother dies and stuff, right?

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Balec can erase the memories of others. He has the powers and talents of a gorilla, but only for five minutes at a time. Balec is protected by an adamantium-like hide and can transform any sloth into air, and can transform kevlar into ice. Balec has been known to absorb the damage from energy-based attacks and redirect it against any combatant in sight. He can tunnel through solid plastic, but doing so drains his endurance for one hour. Balec is able to view distant locations with his mind.
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 Post subject: Re: An overview of Andray's Journey
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Balec Verge wrote:
Is this supposed to be a timeline/recap thing, because some of the events appear take place before and after the Lost History story/thing, right?

Which is why you kind of just fill in what happens before after the battle where his brother dies and stuff, right?


The book "Lost History of Elay" is a history book that is in the process of being written, it is what everyone who goes to Elay's schools use when learning history.

So to answer that, none of the events happen before or after it, it's just referencing it for learning purposes and this is sort of a timeline of the history of Elay.

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 Post subject: Re: An overview of Andray's Journey
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Okay - got it, thanks.

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He can force creatures to freeze in place and can become tiny. Sadly, Balec becomes ugly in the presence of silver, and struggles with being unable to smell.


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