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 Post subject: Valar: Nienna
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 11:27 am 
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A flourishing, spotless daisy, shrouded in gray cobwebs.
The cloak of the Nazgul, or of emperor Palpatine.
A dark planetarium dome.
The curve of the two stacks of pages in a very thick book laid open under a light.
A tear running down the inside of a veil.
The shadow of a small cloud wandering slowly over quiet fields.
The vapor of maid’s breath in cold air, as she stands, tired and lost, in an unknown town.
The pendant mane of a small mare, that has searched many years and never found a companion to run with.
The slight stream of gentle water wrung from a handful of moss.
The distant sound of a wind blowing over a far away field.
The arms of a young girl, carrying a younger girl.
A slight branch bearing only closed buds, heavy with dew.
The period at the end of a letter.
The weight of a high hay rick on the small, round part of the field it rests on.
The shape of a dying boy in the arms of his sister.
A chair receiving the back of an old man.
The sound of someone’s else’s voice, as heard in their own mind.
Showers falling on a pale face deep in the woods.
A woman’s whisper in a young man’s ear.
Fitting together the shell of the egg, after the chick has died.
A green leaf falling as if in autumn.
Passing the hand over someone else’s brow.
A gentle touch that wakes you in the night.
A young, silent stranger.
A torn cloak fallen on the ground.
A flower growing and blooming in the topmost branch of a high tree.
Tears falling on a sleeping serpent.
From a hairline crack in the stone of a mountainside emerge miniscule shoots, which will after eons become trees that will tear the mountain down.

What do you think?
What parts stand out to you? Does it give you any ideas? Do you have a question about some part? Does any of it remind you of something?

Please critique!

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