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Treasure Abyss (Writing)
Treasure Abyss
Based off of Treasure Planet
By: The Holy Worlds Crew
Prologue
Once, many centuries ago, there lived a vicious pirate, feared by all. Even the worse pirates shuddered at the mention of his name. This vagabond looted more ships and worlds than could be counted. How he did this? No one quite knew. Some said that he was a powerful magician, and others claimed he was possessed. However, all of the reports agreed on one fact: this pirate would swoop in out of nowhere, gather up as much treasure as his ships could carry, and then vanished without a trace. Who was this pirate, you may ask? What was his name? I shall tell you. His name was Sir Emeth Mimetes, the Dark Lord. Everyone said that he hid his precious treasure in a mysterious abyss. But where?
As the years went by, generations passed, and the memory of Emeth faded. But one day, a young boy by the name of James Hawkins discovered a book recounting all of Emeth's deeds. This book kindled a fire in young James that never left him. A passion to find Emeth's treasure, a loot of a thousand worlds! This is James' story.
Chapter 1
James' story begins on a regular day at the Benbo Inn, the inn that his mother, Sarah, owned. Because James, or Jim as everyone called him, had no father, this was the Hawkins family's only way to support themselves. But, of course, young Jim was restless and could never settle himself down long enough to wash the dishes. He preferred to sail through the air, feel the wind on his face, and experience life. However, this did not always go well for Jim.
One busy day at the Benbo Inn, Sarah struggled to keep up her energy in order to get enough pay for her family's necessities. The inn was crowded visitors wanting something to eat for dinner. Among these guests was an old family friend by the name of Doctor Delbert Doppler, an astrophysicist.
"Where is Jim when I need him! Let's see, Mrs. Parkins wants perp juice with a side of squiggly crawlers, the McNaffies need the family five order, and--What am I missing?!" Sarah balanced the different foods on her arm as she scrambled to serve all of the impatient guests.
(Sven, you as Dr. Doppler and Romanadvoratrelundar as Sarah can jump in now, and Elly can when she wants to bring in Jim, arrested.)
Based off of Treasure Planet
By: The Holy Worlds Crew
Prologue
Once, many centuries ago, there lived a vicious pirate, feared by all. Even the worse pirates shuddered at the mention of his name. This vagabond looted more ships and worlds than could be counted. How he did this? No one quite knew. Some said that he was a powerful magician, and others claimed he was possessed. However, all of the reports agreed on one fact: this pirate would swoop in out of nowhere, gather up as much treasure as his ships could carry, and then vanished without a trace. Who was this pirate, you may ask? What was his name? I shall tell you. His name was Sir Emeth Mimetes, the Dark Lord. Everyone said that he hid his precious treasure in a mysterious abyss. But where?
As the years went by, generations passed, and the memory of Emeth faded. But one day, a young boy by the name of James Hawkins discovered a book recounting all of Emeth's deeds. This book kindled a fire in young James that never left him. A passion to find Emeth's treasure, a loot of a thousand worlds! This is James' story.
Chapter 1
James' story begins on a regular day at the Benbo Inn, the inn that his mother, Sarah, owned. Because James, or Jim as everyone called him, had no father, this was the Hawkins family's only way to support themselves. But, of course, young Jim was restless and could never settle himself down long enough to wash the dishes. He preferred to sail through the air, feel the wind on his face, and experience life. However, this did not always go well for Jim.
One busy day at the Benbo Inn, Sarah struggled to keep up her energy in order to get enough pay for her family's necessities. The inn was crowded visitors wanting something to eat for dinner. Among these guests was an old family friend by the name of Doctor Delbert Doppler, an astrophysicist.
"Where is Jim when I need him! Let's see, Mrs. Parkins wants perp juice with a side of squiggly crawlers, the McNaffies need the family five order, and--What am I missing?!" Sarah balanced the different foods on her arm as she scrambled to serve all of the impatient guests.
(Sven, you as Dr. Doppler and Romanadvoratrelundar as Sarah can jump in now, and Elly can when she wants to bring in Jim, arrested.)
I'll try to be better about this! 
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